User blog comment:Palantian/Fate/Oblivion Twilight/@comment-6432165-20150204211825

Ah, I do alway like looking at other writer's takes on the Grail War and the consequential events that occur in them. It's a good read I'll give you that, and I would love to read more truth be told.

Although If I had to put in any kind of critisism to help improve you're frame work, I wouldn't have as many villains. I know that you want to include ALL of the Arcana as a complete set, but if you actually set out with this to write a light novel, it would be an authors nightmare. You would probably need one whole entire volume just to cover the villains.