User talk:2600:1700:D591:7FA0:50B7:AF5A:84F1:1295

Shuten-douji:

The section you edited is outdated. If you want to edit that, you should open up the Skills page and edit the appropriate section for her skill.

Nightingale:

She opposed the era and the world with absurdity, meaning that the act of her using health care to do so is absurd to the normal people. You should put that back in as that was in the JP text as an important adjective to the actions she did.

Where did she return to after her military service? People may think she may not have gone back home to her country, but to another.

Last sentence: The sentence emphasizes the fact that the practicing nurses made the Nightingale Pledge, but the sentence you changed seems to divert focus on what is the Nightingale Pledge (a moral oath they made), which I feel ruins the meaning the JP sentence said about it.

If you can change these as soon as you can, that would be appreciative. Thanks!