User blog comment:Skeith9/Heroic Spirits Speculation/@comment-59.189.201.212-20140515054412/@comment-24754018-20140515112710

Well, first of all, props for actually getting one done, I've been stuck on mine for a small while (well, it sort of took the back-seat to my exams, but that was before the creative issues).

While I admit to being a little reluctant to make Judas a female, it's sort of a common trait in the nasuverse and and you have the right to write it that way if you find it interesting (and I admit that it sort of is.).

The NPs seem interesting, I like how you implemented Akledama (honestly, I was a bit stumped on that one myself). Maybe it could do with a little flavour work, but it's quite a nice idea. Mark of betrayal seems decent, my version just indicated the servants name, so this seems like a better choice in general.

All in all, good work thus far.