User blog comment:Skeith9/Heroic Spirits Speculation/@comment-175.143.156.204-20140628040923/@comment-24762556-20140628163929

I for one will not "love" your idea as "you think" until you learn to stop double and triple posting.

I'll give you this in persepective of what your idea sounds like. Your concept of Dorian is that he's a terrible fighter so what he needs to do to win is just hide until everyone else finishes killing each other right? Here's something in the same vein.

Servant: 3 Little Pigs summoned as one single pig

Class : Assassin because apparently killing a single wolf counts as assassination.

Parameters : STR E // END E // MAG E // AGI E // LUK E // NP E

NP:

Straw House

Rank : E

Does nothing, absolutely useless

Wooden House

Rank : E

Provides weak defenses and is otherwise useless

Brick House

Rank : B

Creates an impenetrable brick house that will not break even against A Rank NPs such as Excalibur, the only way an enemy can infiltrate the house is to physically enter through the house's chimney where a boiling pot is waiting below. The pot deals instant kill damage to anyone falling into it.

There, we have a stupid character whose concept is to "wait out" as his enemies kill each other while he remains safe because he won't "lose" until someone manages to successfully infiltrate his base, where at which point its instant game over for him.

Tell me how that is different from your concept of Dorian Grey?

EDIT : Being college isn't an excuse, I'm also in college and I'm still acing both my studies AND busy with the other million things happening around me, yet I still am able to make a much more constructive character profile than yours.